Why Do I Want To Be An Ambassador Essay

Student Ambassador Essay

by Michelle
(NY)

Original Text: Student Ambassador Essay


What makes a Student Ambassador is the ability to listen to the needs and desire of the students, to organize forums about issues, and to become a role model to the students.
The reasons I want to become a Student Ambassador is because I want to gain more confidence and want to meet new people. Being a Student Ambassador means that you will represent the school at different events. I really enjoy coming to school and love coming here everyday, and it would be nice to be a part of something that I love.

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Revised Text:

What makes a good Student Ambassador, is the ability to listen to the needs and desires of others, to organize forums about issues, and to become a role model to the students.

The reason I want to become a Student Ambassador is because I want to gain more confidence, and want to meet new people. Being a Student Ambassador means that you will represent the school at different events. I really enjoy coming to school, and love coming here everyday. It would be nice to be a part of something that I love.

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Name: Blake Blackman

Where I am from: Monroe, NC

Program: Transfer Program in Religion

About me: I grew up on a turkey farm in rural North Carolina, listening to my grandparents, parents, and aunts recount timeless stories of life in the South. Along the way, spinning a good yarn became embedded somewhere deep inside me—and then life gave me some tough stories to tell. Last year, my first book, The Journey of the Black Heart, was released where I tell some of those stories.

I have lived my life a bit out of the normal order. Now that my son has graduated from high school, I have decided to return to college to earn the degree I have always longed for. Over the years I have developed a passion for the religions of the world and Christian theology. Through my experiences I have learned the power of kindness and connection. It is my hope and goal to combine all of these in doing my part to make the world a gentler place by becoming a hospital chaplain. I currently work in the Patient Relations department at a hospital. I could not feel more honored to have the opportunity each day to help bring even a small sense of peace to people's very tough circumstances.

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